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PostSubject: Adamant   May 25th 2010, 10:05 pm

this woman from a univeristy in chicago come down to tak to us about poetry and everyone is required to write a piece
now im no poet so this is what i came up with

Adamant

As a young cub I stroll through the lands looking for a new family
Long I wander in the depths of the forest trying to find a place to call my home

Dawn approaches and I am awoken.
Is that pancakes I smell?

Ahhh, how the smell tingles my senses.
Still woozy I hear a voice in the distance

Morning, would you like some breakfast?
Wait what? As I open my eyes I see a crowd of people.

Around the table we sit and I look around. Could this be? Have I found a family?
Soon my question is answered as I am offered a warm bed where I lay my head

Now Iím certain. I have a home. A family to call my own
These people I see around me.

Truth be told, we are adamant.
An untamable and precious gemstone that canít be broken.
Isnít that what family represents? We have an unbreakable bond made over time and pressure, we shine like a diamond and are reshaped but never die
We are...
ADAMANT



let me know what u think, and suggestions to fix pieces r welcome just do it fast tis due friday =P
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 2:09 am

its cool,got no fix idea
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 3:56 am

lols chucki, didnt realise u had it in u
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 5:38 am

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lols chucki, didnt realise u had it in u
AWWWW blush


oeh oeh btw
pancakes r maxies x)
and reshape but never die is from him too cept he said: My army never dies, it just changes shape cat face ( or something like dat)
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 7:56 am

lol it's pretty good (especially teh pancakes part!!!! )















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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 9:33 am

i could change it to: "is that muffins i smell? " sweet
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 9:35 am

made me soooo sad :< but it's GREAT
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 9:45 am

not bad ;D














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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 10:07 am

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i could change it to: "is that muffins i smell? " sweet
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heall yeah! yummy















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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 10:09 am

"are those muffins i smell " kinda does sound better then "are those pancakes i smell"
whatchu guys think?
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 2:25 pm

XxBabyLovexX wrote:
"are those muffins i smell " kinda does sound better then "are those pancakes i smell"
whatchu guys think?
yeah muffins better imo, also because it tastes better. yummy
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 26th 2010, 11:50 pm

*feet*


















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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 27th 2010, 11:57 am

is dat feet i smell xD?
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 27th 2010, 12:44 pm

Yeah you never know after a warm summers night.

But beside that I like it Wink


















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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   May 28th 2010, 6:02 am

Friday ~ Poem handed in :]
wish me luck to win that $75 :3 Blow it on GP xD
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   December 12th 2010, 8:20 am

felt like moving it here so more ppl can read it Very Happy















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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   December 12th 2010, 10:37 am

lols its chuckies not lynnies ??
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   December 12th 2010, 11:01 am

lol old post xD
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   February 7th 2011, 10:43 am

-hick ups-

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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   February 7th 2011, 12:11 pm

+1 post xD
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   February 7th 2011, 3:10 pm

is this spam also WAzaaaaaaaaaa
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PostSubject: Re: Adamant   February 7th 2011, 3:15 pm

wowie thats good even i think so and i dun like reading or poetry xD
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